Animal Town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is the hook.

I need to improve on using capital letters.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

Stretch! The giraffe put his long neck out through the glass window the energetic zebra ran quickly across the road.

I can see a beautiful lion sitting on the van.The bear is sitting in the van.

The Meerkats are standing up.

A bird is standing on the van looking at the zebra walking across the road.

I am a beautiful bird , my feathers are purple and orange and fluffy like a bear.